Published January 31, 2006
My friend and I wrote this haiku in physics today when we probably should have been paying attention. It's dumb, I quite enjoy it! 
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The hoola-hoop of life turns
Slowly, like a fox.
Haha.
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Oh, haah. Whoops.
I fail when it comes to interpretation--sorry!
Nice work!
spiffilicious!
Yeah, that's the stupidity of it. Foxes are fast, meaning that life is fast, although, when you think about it, what is longer than life? Get it? Slowly, like a fox, which is fast . . . lol. It's not really supposed to make sense!
Neither do I. Maybe it's a Canadian thing...? lol
No seriously, I like this. It's funny.
My only complaint is, don't you have to make a hoola hoop go really fast to keep it spinning? Or it will fall down your body and die? Eh, or I could be completely wrong. I haven't used one of those things in ages!
like a fox?
i don't get it.